Friday 10 January 2014

The elements comentry

whilst sitting at home with an overwhelming feeling of sadness i realised how truly heavy my limbs, legs specificaly, felt.

i thought about how when you reach that low it feels like all the world and its elements are against you.

as the thought an poem progressed i thought of the simple game rock paper sisors and how elements override each other. and how, then, the elements which make up the world, and weight us down, can be aimed at each other to overcome and prevail.

focus mainly remained then on changing states and mud is sticky but can hold u in place, and the rain that pelts you with bullets can save you from the mud, and sun saves from rain as rain saves from sun.

a simple idea. which is why i kept it short but has a lot of simple meaning in those few stanzas.
which to a simple observe may just be about the weather.

its called the elements because its the elements, the core parts that make a person which break them . without harmony or balance one feature can overcome the over. its the elements being the reasons the element of surprise,  or fear being to common phrases.



elemnatl joy
element of surprise
elements to fear
elemently clear

 a bonus poem

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